Nice, but...
It's nice... though the whole concept is played out, man. If you try spitting on this beat, the first verse and the first couple of bars of the second verse go well, but the rest is just way too easy to kill. Especially the drumpattern, which sounds exactly the same like Shadowville's "Torcher II" beat blended with Rawkey's "Blackout" beat. Take the hi-hat a little easier next time.